The provided diagram illutrates how the aluminuim drinks can are recycled through various stages.
Overall, this process consists of five main stages starting from collecting cans in collection centre and ending with the recycled new cans which are filled up with drinks and put into vendor machine to sale.
Regarding the diagram, first of all, the thrown or wasted aluminium cans are collected in a collection centre. Then, the collection centre delivered those cans in a recycling centre with the help of vehicles for the further process. Those cans are gathered and pressed inside it.
Following this, those pressed can are put into a recycling plant where the old aluminuim are melt down until they become new. After that, the new aluminuim are roll in a thin layer and finally a new cans are made up of. At last, those recycled cans are filled up with different drinks and kept into a drinks machine for sale and the process begins again.
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- The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'can'?
Suggestion: can
... roll in a thin layer and finally a new cans are made up of. At last, those recycled...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92546583851 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31712817576 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8886640034 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114617161854 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571381726887 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408652576751 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851410979974 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240165984347 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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