the diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stage to enable adjustment.
The diagram represents the information about process of manufacturing of consumer goods.
The first step of consumer goods manufacturing is raw material and manufactured components are stored in storage room. Researched products are transferred for designing purpose. therefore, in the planning department stored products and designed materials are collected to plan the product. After that planned materials are assembled and sent to inspection section to examine the items.
Secondly, if products fail in testing process those items returned to design section. From there again designed goods come to testing purpose through production planning, assembly. Tested goods are packed and dispatched to sale the products. Whilst, from market research department people go to visit design and packing method. At the end of the process through the advertisement products are published.
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- the diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stage to enable adjustment. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... are transferred for designing purpose. therefore, in the planning department stored prod...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...department people go to visit design and packing method. At the end of the proces...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the process through the advertisement products are published.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84496124031 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91685144538 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.294534703 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900817545559 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425010081092 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555665783123 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933922304815 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07214260816 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.7 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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