The diagram details the process of producing olive oil.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided figure explains about the procedure of producing olive oil.
Overall, the process involves 9 to 11 steps before oil is stored and bottled from harvested olives.
In the first stage, olives are harvested from the trees by farmers and then collected into vat before the process of de-leafing begins. After that they are washed thoroughly with clean water later being sent to mill for the process of crushing to make a fine paste. The paste is then processed through malaxer at the temperature less than 27°C.
Later, it is centrifuged in press and produced pomace is then extracted to sent it out to refining factories for further process. On the other side, virgin oil produced from centrifugation is either separated to remove the waste water or decanted to separate water and solid. It is later stores into storage tank before being sent further for the process of packing into bottles.
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- The diagram details the process of producing olive oil Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some people think that using traditions as attractions for money making will destroy our culture but others think that there is nothing wrong with attracting tourists that way Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age, olives are harvested from the trees by farmers and then collected into vat b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed to remove the waste water or decanted to separate water and solid. It is later...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98026315789 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46540292145 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.612191921 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.625 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153074916442 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717897110084 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349969293551 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104836150496 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304263553341 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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