The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
The diagram below illustrates how carbonated drinks are manufactured.
In general, there are five stages, and water is produced entirely by machine, beginning with water disinfection, and finally packaging after consumption.
To begin with, raw water from the storehouse goes through a filter to make a softener and remove all chemicals in the substance. The next stage is the heating evaporation and carbonation process. In this stage, the liquid is pumped into the electrical heater and run through a cooling pipe. After that, carbon dioxide is mixed with water to create carbonated drinks.
In the third stage of the process, carbonated water is delivered to the mixing tank by a long pipe where it is put together with coloring, syrup, and flavor. In stage four, the carbonated drink gets filtered again. Finally, water is filled into cans and plastic bottles and put into boxes before being transported by truck to the supermarket to sell and consume.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, third, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7455360937 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7871685541 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187251728498 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093410586477 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844391399778 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126764001024 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899578623688 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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