The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows information about the process of producing honey by bees. There are seven stages in order to get honey from bees. At first, the bees must first build a hive and find the nectar inside the flower. Then once it is accomplished, they are able to collect the honey bees.
In the beginning, the bees should build a hive which consists of many cells. Next, they will leave their hive to look for flowers. Once the bees find a flower with the nectar inside, they collected and used the nectar for making honey.
In the following stage, the bees must bring the nectar to their hive and the production process can start. First, the bees may put it to the hive and cooled with their wings in order to fulling the cells. Because of that, the nectar loses its water content and as a result, the honey is eventually made.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, may, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49342105263 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07935330814 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2715626042 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137991870135 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618114112532 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580648343349 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986744424699 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371258941314 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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