The diagram explains the progress of producing steel rods in the furniture industry.
Overall, the process consists of eleven main stages which start with the raw material and cease with the inspection part.
In the first chain of progress, iron ore, yellow ore, and carbon are put in a machine to be transformed into raw material. Then, the material is in the melting slit ready to be melted up to 1300 to 1500 C temperature. After that, the melt material enters the smelting cabin to undergo the refinement stage. Moving on, the material continues being varied in the ingot pour stage, where candescent metal is poured into ingots in the pouring machine.
In the next chain, in the strand casting stage, the ingots are connected to a cooling reservoir with a medium temperature of 60 to 100 C, the metal then goes through nozzles within the strands of cooled metal. Consequently, the material will be rolled by the rollers and continues undergoing the heat treatment step. After that, the surface check where the measuring automation works.
In the final chain of the process, the materials are cut by the cutter in the sizing stage and then are delivered to the ID stamping and inspection stage where the steel rods completely available to use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53912929726 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7625392652 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785633142145 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386961385752 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614298460845 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698148209451 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724890750137 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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