The given diagram depicts how bricks are made through detailed stages for building purposes.
It is clearly seen from the graph that the manufacturing of bricks is consisted of seven steps with the initial one is to dig clay and the process ends with products delivered.
At the beginning, clay is dug out of the ground with the help of digger. Following this, the clay is left onto a metal grid to undergoes the working of roller. After being crashed by the roller, the mass of clay is mix with sand and water and the combination then is either put into mold or cut into rectangle shapes by wire cutter.
Subsequently, the drying oven makes bricks dried from 24 to 48 hours before the bricks are heat twice The first time kiln serves moderate level of heat from 200 to 980 degree C, then bricks experience high heat at 870 to 1300 degree C. Next, cooling chamber eases the bricks from 48 to 72 hours. The end-products are packed and delivered to different destinations by trucks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...nd and water and the combination then is either put into mold or cut into rectan...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hen is either put into mold or cut into rectangle shapes by wire cutter. Sub...
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...ate level of heat from 200 to 980 degree C, then bricks experience high heat at 8...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ed to different destinations by trucks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42317388856 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4316504408 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111416412679 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433787821655 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052657168403 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769029707106 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549590070557 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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