The diagram the Life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth
The given flow chart illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the stages of producing silk cloth It is a clear and coherent representation
These are four main process in the life cycle of the silkworm from eggs to moth the process of silk cloth production in values size step from , silkworm cocoon to silk material
At the first process in the life cycle of a silkworm ,the moth lays its eggs around ten days laters silkworm larvae hatch from the eggs these larvae feed on mulberry leaves.then after four to six weeks the larvae become coverd in the silk thread and it takes between three to eight days for a cell cocoon to be produced
For silk cloth production a cocoon is first seleted and then boiled in water after boiling the silk thread that makes up the cocoon is unwounded and then several strand in the process the thread can either be dyed and then woven into silk fabric or it can be woven first and then dyed subsequently
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...loth production in values size step from , silkworm cocoon to silk material At th...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... process in the life cycle of a silkworm ,the moth lays its eggs around ten days l...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun strand seems to be countable; consider using: 'several strands'.
Suggestion: several strands
...kes up the cocoon is unwounded and then several strand in the process the thread can either be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45977011494 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23223142681 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488505747126 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 174.0 22.4926829268 774% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 776.0 112.824112599 688% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 174.0 22.9334400587 759% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360024948523 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.360024948523 0.103423049105 348% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250337295002 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11979453716 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 86.6 13.2329268293 654% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -79.75 61.2550243902 -130% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 67.6 10.3012195122 656% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.54 8.06136585366 180% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 11.4329268293 455% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 71.6 10.9970731707 651% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 87.0 11.0658536585 786% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.