The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram describes the manufacturing process of chocolate
Overall, it is evident that the ripe red pods undergo the series of steps to produce chocolate.
In the first step, the farmers living in South America and Indonesia collect the ripe red pods on the cacao trees and havest the white cacao beans inside. After being havested, they are fermented by using the banana leaves. In the fouth step, beans, which were passed through the fermentation step, are dried under the high temperature of sun before being put in large sacks. The products are delivered to the factory by train or lorry. In the factory, the results of previous steps are roasted at 350 degree of temperature, then being crushed and removed the outer shell by machine. The final step is pressing the inner part of crushed roasted beans to produce the liquid chocolate. This liquid form can be used to make other forms of chocolate.
In conclusion, the red ripe pods on cacao trees undergo 10 steps to transform into chocolate.
- It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill To what extent do you agree of disagree 67
- Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots
- Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions Discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
- The charts below show the average working hours of full time workers and part time workers in three countries and a comparison with the European average Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43454052356 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7006536787 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0471206957015 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209551718019 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349865943804 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467782450589 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453838370255 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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