The figure shows how the fruits are preserved and it involves 14 steps.
The first step involves collecting the fruits by hand after which they are transported by a truck to the washing area. The fruits are washed and are checked for quality which involves a check for presence of blemishes on fruit, after which the fruits are stored in cold conditions at a temperature below 0 degree celsius. The fruits are then weighed and graded in a machine with a weight in it and then, they are pealed and sliced to place the bits of sliced fruit in a small can. The can is then sealed and sterilised at high temperature. To avoid confusion, the cans are labelled with the image of that particular fruit and dispatched by a truck to the place where they are to be sent.
To conclude, the canning of fruit is a simple process which even can be done at home but requires some extra care.
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- The graph below shows the percentage change in the nubmer of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.-alam-(re-write) 67
- The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature. and make comparison where relevant. 73
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sported by a truck to the washing area. The fruits are washed and are checked for q...
^^^
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t a temperature below 0 degree celsius. The fruits are then weighed and graded in a...
^^^
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he bits of sliced fruit in a small can. The can is then sealed and sterilised at hi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45061728395 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39459235569 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3988916124 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167046936911 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850434913532 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385263828615 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121160446176 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383073236732 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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