The given diagram illustrates the typical process of the modern manufacture of canned fruit.
Looking at the diagram it is obvious that the process through various steps, therefore, the brief rundown has three major steps, beginning with collecting the fresh fruit at the farm and ending with transporting to purchase for the customers.
The first step is harvesting the fruits and carrying them to a factory. Initially, the fresh fruit, which is taken care of the hard farmers, is ripe in a suitable time and the large of part actually is the tropical fruits. As soon as, they are collected carefully by hand to make sure that they don’t pretty much damage. After that, all of them are transported to a factory.
The second step is the preliminary fruits with six consecutive actions. Firstly, the fruits are cleaned by a washing system. Next, every of fruit is checked the quality so they are certainly not having any corruptive things or the insect inside, moreover, some indexes of chemical also don’t miss. Then the cold storage needs to ensure freshness, about lower 0 Celsius. Subsequently, the fruit, which has a reasonable weight, are chosen and graded to remove poor quality ones. After which, qualities fruit is peeled the outside shells and cored the seeds if they have.
The last step puts in cans by an automatic machine and sends the produce for sale. In the first place, the slight pieces are canned in the iron boxes, and behind that, the boxes must be sealed to complete hermetically. Followed by cooking these boxes by a special heating process, the bacteria cannot live in this condition and no being infectious. Their outwards are more likely to attract by labeling on around the body of boxes, as well as their qualities. Ultimately, they need to stock on pallets and wait for orders as well as they are distributed to store via truck. Thanks to modern machines, canned fruit becomes to produce with consistence quality
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omes to produce with consistence quality
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54825963765 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 106.607317073 186% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8397638587 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899295310749 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293273116718 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271269373266 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571267511449 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271727917846 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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