The given charts demonstrate the change of frenton town over two decades starting in 1990.
Overall, it is immediately clear that the main street, which run over from the south to north of the town, divided this location into 2 parts with a similar square. Beside that Frenton witnessed two modernized huge changes, as well as the green area seemed to shrink and the remainder was the development of the residential zone and the service.
As can be seen from 1990, the majority of the areas was covered with trees, experiencing significant changes during the next 22 years, exactly the tree zone at the center of town( cafe and park) was cut down in order for erecting the hotel and golf course. Furthermore, the playing field with trees was disappeared and replaced by a new housing zone with a range of blocks of flats. A noticeable is the trees at the west south corner, being babied carefully in Technopark.
22 years later, other outstanding features are the growth of qualities of commercial zone and residential area. The hospital was extended nearly three times as its square before. The new facilities were installed, transferring from theatre and shops to cinema and supermarket respectively. Moreover, a new restaurant was constructed next to the hospital. Despite many developments occurred, the educational areas( school, library) in the left of the main street did not experience any changes over this period.
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012. 83
- Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages. 93
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 73
- The diagram shows how fruit is canned.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...g zone with a range of blocks of flats. A noticeable is the trees at the west south corner, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xperience any changes over this period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04661016949 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76861631193 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635593220339 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9592745113 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.272727273 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113909217254 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407527699777 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526143777531 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861777138996 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542205961983 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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