The picture illustrates the typical process of the manufacture of high-level fruit tinned.
it is obvious that there are 3 major steps in the process, beginning with the collections of the fresh fruit at the farm and ending with the transport to purchasing for the customers.
Starting with harvesting the fruits and carrying them to a factory. Initially, the fresh fruit, which is taken care of the hard farmers, is ripe in a suitable time and the large of part actually is the tropical fruits. As soon as, they are collected carefully by hand to make sure that they don’t pretty much damage. After that, all of them are transported to a factory.
The second step is the preliminary fruits with six consecutive actions. Firstly, the fruits are cleaned by a washing system. Next, every of fruits is checked the qualities so they are certainly not having any corruptive things or the insect inside, moreover, some index of chemical also don’t miss. To keep them enough fresh, it is necessary to sore in the cold temperature, about lower 0 Celsius. Subsequently, the choices of the fruits, which has a reasonable weight, take the similar to peel and core.
The last step is canned and sent. In the first place, the slight pieces are canned in the iron boxes, and behind that, the boxes must be sealed to complete hermetically. The following of step is cooking these boxes by high heat, the bacteria can not live in this condition and no being sick. Every company has its own branch, they show it by labeling on around the body of boxes, their outwards look like two peas in a pot, as well as their qualities. Ultimately, they need to store in space and wait for the trucks, delivering to the supermarkets or the stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...anufacture of high-level fruit tinned. it is obvious that there are 3 major steps...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, so, well, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7417218543 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6170338702 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 106.607317073 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0645832841 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0710930797799 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227435853133 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218375931071 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401302755352 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155633089799 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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