The given picture illustrates how to produce electricity from the geothermal energy.
Overall, it is noticeable that energy has to go through five steps before to become a power.
As can be seen from the diagram below, the first stage begins with the cold water located upside the ground. The cold water pumps down on 4.5 km. Then, the second step inject water in the geothermal zone, which include the hot rocks. After that, high degree water has the well production step and pump up back out of the ground.
Two last stages are the last. When the hot water goes outside, it becomes a condenser. A steam from the previous step makes turbine powered and finally it turns on the generator which produce electricity.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: lethianhthu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 599.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.792 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30555503079 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1335791158 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5555555556 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151921402909 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547444974596 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678660389577 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100369849342 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680440350131 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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