This diagram demonstrates the process of how to produce electricity using geothermal energy. There are five stages and some important equipments are nesscessary during the process.
To begin, cold water is pumped down along a tunnel of 4.5 km depth straight down to the underground to the injection well. Then, the water reaches the production well after going through a so-called geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks. After that, the water which has become hot is pumped up to the ground again.
After all the procedures underground are completed, a condenser is used to transform hot water into steam, and the stem is utilized as power to make a turbin to rotate quickly. In the final stage, the power produced from turbine will be used in a generator, where electicity is finally generated to the power plant for various use.
Overall, the process of producing electricity contains underground and ground productions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16447368421 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78138568019 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1169801612 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182302587333 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083790586996 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122898806704 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114507096843 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875879573733 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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