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The information provided in the diagram illustrate the lifespan of the honey bee.
Lifespan of the hobey bee starts when female bees lay one or two eggs every three days. After 9-10 days, eggs hatch and honey bees are ready to live anymore within 5 days. Then, they try to get accustomed to living their life within 7 days. At that time, their nymphes moult three times as they grow day by day. Next process is followed by being adult. Honey bees live adult period of their life in this process. After 4 days, they turn into mature bees. After that, they have new eggs to spawn just like their mothers did 34 or 36 days ago. It can be understood that their average life cycle is 34 or 36 days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 566.0 965.302439024 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32061068702 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92408816361 2.65546596893 72% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679389312977 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.3587896863 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.6 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.8 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238969749645 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10258766227 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105697470562 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24101327491 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631124669655 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 13.2329268293 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 11.4140731707 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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