The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee

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The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee

The picture gives a description of the honey bee’s life cycle. Overall, there are several stages which illustrate how eggs become insects within over a month.
First off, female bees lay 2 eggs in maximum with the frequency of three days and let it hatch naturally. After a period of 9-10 days, baby bees are formed firmly and start to grow outside of the eggshells. From this stage, honey bees will go through three times molting from its previous nymph by shedding or losing old feathers, hair or skin so that a new growth will be allowed. This need 5 days, then 7 days and finally 9 days to terminate the whole period.
The second main part of the process demonstrates when the time bee grows as a young adult to a complete mature form. After 21-day molting, young bee emerges and it takes more 4 days to be in an adult appearance.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49673202614 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30085783407 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718954248366 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5447929278 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163545320629 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778088016403 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090008412574 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114836779636 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408858147998 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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