The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee

The diagram describes the reproduction of the honey bee.
Overall, there are various stages involved in the cyclical process of a honey bee, from females laying a couple of eggs every 3 days to their eggs developing as mature ones.
At the beginning of the process, female bees often produce one or two eggs throughout 3 days after mating for life. Therefore, each honey bee begins its life as an egg with the hatching process taking place at least 9 days. It also takes eggs a half of a week to crack and a newborn bee, which is commonly called a nymph, will emerge from it.
The process continues with nymphs growing, which generally lasts 21 days during the period. At that time, nymphs shed their outer layer three times 2 days apart and their sizes are gradually increasing day by day. The second molting time occurs in a week when the first time a newborn hatched. Next, nymphs undergo the final molting in the following 2 days, which is noticed as the last cycle of nymphs because after that, they take a metamorphosis stage and form themselves into young adult ones, having sizes far bigger than those of nymphs. To grow their full lengths and weights, maturing ones have to spend 4 days of their life. Finally, the cycle begins again when those female adult honey bees mate and lay eggs.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22117886558 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7476335808 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220132699287 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103534403796 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111007667648 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188265863021 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115621996864 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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