The picture illustrates the life cycle of the honey bee.
Overall, there are various stages involved in the reproduction of the honey bee from the female bee spawning each 3 days to their development into the fully grown one.
At the beginning of the process, the female bee lays a couple of eggs every 3 days after mating each other. Then, they begin life as eggs for 9 or 10 days, at which point, the eggs crack and the newly hatched bees, which are commonly called the nymph, will emerge in the next 5 days.
The process continues with the moulting process of the young bees. The metamorphosis stage happens 3 times in total. In the first one, the nymphs need about 7 days to emit its outer. Next time, the necessary days increase to 9 days. After each time moulting, the nymphs grow considerably in size. Finally, when their terminal transformation takes place, it will take about 4 days to completely become the adult ones.
Eventually, the cycle begins again when the bees mate with their counterparts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... development into the fully grown one. At the beginning of the process, the fem...
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...nymph, will emerge in the next 5 days. The process continues with the moulting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69101123596 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47992189891 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5624373792 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184338237116 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827039804841 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144731860987 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174928191572 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174152852933 0.0819641961636 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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