The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth
The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth
The diagram depicts the life cycle of the and production of silk cloth. It is clear and coherent representation.
There are five stages in the lifecycle of silkworm; from egg to adult moth, six stage produce of silkworm cocoon to silk material
At the first stage in the life cycle of a silkworm, the moth lays its egg. After the days, silkworm larvae eat the food that is mulberry leaf then, after four tk six week, the larvae become covered with silk thread, it take three to eight days for full cocoon to be produced
In a silk cloth production, a cocoon is first selected and then boiled in water. After boiling, the silk thread that make up the cocoon is unwind, 300-900 strand are twisted together. At the four and fifth in the process, the thread can ve dyed and the weaven into silk fabric, it can be weave first and than dyed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he diagram depicts the life cycle of the and production of silk cloth. It is clea...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...s mulberry leaf then, after four tk six week, the larvae become covered with silk th...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...vae become covered with silk thread, it take three to eight days for full cocoon to ...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
... silk thread that make up the cocoon is unwind, 300-900 strand are twisted together. A...
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Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
... silk fabric, it can be weave first and than dyed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44805194805 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22037096574 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9118767674 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361807653476 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189294894715 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217303904669 0.0843802449381 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248895339102 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134847688364 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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