The first diagram shows the procreation of the silk worm while the second one depicts the creation of silk.
Overall, the phases a silk worm goes through are from birth to development, whereas the latter involves locating the undeveloped ones for making silk.
From eggs to moths, a full grown moth lays its eggs on a leaf and these hatch into larva in about ten days. About four to six weeks later, these larva have fed on mulberry leaves and are covered in silk thread. Nearly three to eight days later this thread morphs into an outer cover.
This becomes the most critical phase for the insect. The choice lies between commercial gain or creation of a moth. If allowed to develop, an adult moth emerges from this structure also known as cocoon. If not, it becomes the source for silk fabric. On being selected to produce silk, the cocoon is boiled at the prescribed temperature, Then the silk thread is unwound from the same. Its length varies from three hundred metres to three times the size. Each strand is then twisted and dyed and woven to make cloth.
Clearly, the time taken for the formation of a cocoon is longer than the creation of silk cloth.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- the table shows how many people used different form public transport in million between 2010 and 2014. 56
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk Cloth. 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. 61
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this larva' or 'these larvae', 'these larvas'?
Suggestion: this larva; these larvae; these larvas
...en days. About four to six weeks later, these larva have fed on mulberry leaves and are cov...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
... gain or creation of a moth. If allowed to develop, an adult moth emerges from this struct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13825833525 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3513937175 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3076923077 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148377572425 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531701503117 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063160932266 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103380286646 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661807977924 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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