The diagram shows the process of making coffee.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and,make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorial representation illustrates the information about the manufacturing method to produce coffee.
In overall, there are eleven stages are involving for making a coffee. However, each and every steps crucial to manufacture of coffee. Whilst, omission of any step will halt the whole process.
With regards to an initial stage, the coffee beans are picked up from the farmers. Secondly, these collected seeds are dried in the heat of sun. After this, the dried beans are roasted. In the fourth step, these roasted beans are fridges to cooled rapidly. In the fifth stage, the cooled seeds are grinder in grinding machine in a foam of powder.
The diagram further proves that in the next step, the powder of coffee beans are mixing with hot water. In the following stage, these mixture is straining between hot water. After that, the mixture of coffee powder is stored in freezer to freeze them. In the another step, these frozen liquid is grinding again with the help of grinding machine. In the tenth stage, these mixture is dried with using vacuum and where water are separating from it. Eventually, this powder is filling into jars and these produce coffee jars are ready to sell.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... In overall, there are eleven stages are involving for making a coffee. However, each and ...
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Line 13, column 129, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mixture' or 'these mixtures'?
Suggestion: this mixture; these mixtures
...with hot water. In the following stage, these mixture is straining between hot water. After t...
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Line 13, column 367, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mixture' or 'these mixtures'?
Suggestion: this mixture; these mixtures
...f grinding machine. In the tenth stage, these mixture is dried with using vacuum and where wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34614965581 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542288557214 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.4181070327 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0652947025504 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024697701901 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348616995926 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568252070594 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459732081365 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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