The diagram shows the process of making orange juice
The given diagram illustrates the orange juice making process.
Overall, there are twelve main steps in the process in which orange juice is produced, beginning with fresh oranges being collected from farms and ending with different kinds of orange juice that is used by customers.
First of all, fresh oranges are transported to a factory where oranges are processed. After being washed, those oranges are putted into an extracting machine which categorized oranges to two group in the end. The first group is that waste solid being used as a source of food for animal. The second group is that fresh juice which is continuously divided into two parts. One being packed and distributed to various shop where it is sold. One being loaded onto refrigerator trucks which help to keep the orange juice fresh during the way to an evaporation factory. Once concentrate juice is produced as a result of evaporation process, it is canned and transported to warehouses. Following this, those canned juice is given to a factory where it is mixed with water. Finally, it is packed and distributed to different shops in order to supply to the demand of consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e lots of money to do other things. You dont have to pay for transport, hotel, food ...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...el. Partners can meet face-to-face from many different countries, in cities far from each othe...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts but also have potential limitations. Whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, in general, of course, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34343434343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07916093666 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5143070559 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282022646606 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090343971339 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077305996117 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204082360137 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878161829699 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.