The diagram shows production of sugar by a German company for supermarkets and restaurants
The image illustrates sugar manufacturing for supermarkets and restaurants by a German company. Overall, It is a process with an eight-stage-linear procedure beginning with the harvest of raw materials and ending in delivering process.
Initially, the sugarcane which is the raw material of sugar from tropical regions is harvested. Then, the raw juice of sugarcane is collected using crusher before it filtered partially to accumulate raw sugar. Next, The raw sugar is shipped to German for the subsequent process. After arrived in German, the raw sugar passes the stage to be melted and filtered in the complete purification stage. The result from the earlier stage is sugar syrup that crystallized in the fifth stage. The sugar crystals are dried by using the fan with the low temperatures. Finally, the dried-sugar crystals are packaged before transported and ready to be sold in the supermarkets or used in the restaurant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30405405405 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16518537625 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7720657729 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217415728748 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113558181502 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112106444029 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182835202208 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00945364994195 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.