The given pie chart represents percentage of four types of transport used in Edmonton, while the table provides reasons why people using cars in the same city. It is clear from data in the pie chart that car is the most used form of transport in Edmonton, however, bus and taxi showed opposite. The main reason of car use, is commute to work, but shopping and leisure activities are not the important for a drivers in Edmonton.
It is apparently seen that motor vehicles and light rail transit are the most used form of transport in Edmonton with 45 per cent and 35 per cent respectively. According to the data in the pie chart, bus and taxi have the low percentage of use with only ten per cent.
It could be noticed that people use cars as a way to get to work in fifty-five per cent. Drivers in Edmonton also use their cars as a transport for kids to school and business purposes in 40 per cent and 45 per cent respectively. The lowest percentage of car use is seen in category for shopping and leisure with only fifteen per cent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'commuted'.
Suggestion: commuted
...pposite. The main reason of car use, is commute to work, but shopping and leisure activ...
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Line 1, column 406, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a driver' or simply 'drivers'?
Suggestion: a driver; drivers
...re activities are not the important for a drivers in Edmonton. It is apparently seen ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'transport'.
Suggestion: transport
...vers in Edmonton also use their cars as a transport for kids to school and business purpose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45055265876 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494791666667 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2074368738 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272486713682 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150639581993 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600980292242 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206597025276 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820421088495 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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