The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighbourhood since 1920.
The two maps show the main changes which have occurred in the Sawry District between 1920 and 2020.
Overall, it appears that Sawry district has become a much more modern city, with Yang office complex, apartments and several major infrastructure projects.
One interesting change is that Yang office complex has been constructed in the west of the district. In 1920, there was not any apartments for living, but apartments have been built near the Oak Avenue. Another striking change is that a new road has been built with bridge, to connect Oak Avenue with across the Elmwood river. However, the beach has also been made into bike path.
If we look at the Miller’s lake area, it has been modernized since 1920, and a range of buildings have been developed, such as apartments, houses, shops. The south of the town used to be a green area, with lots of trees, but the trees cut down and a new Prestwich primary school has been moved. A final interesting development has been the introduction of a Lonoco Petrol station in the west of the district.
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- The bar chart below illustrates five different industries percentage share of Brazil s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029 82
- The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighbourhood since 1920 73
- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80327868852 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51589352053 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7177513323 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195505223523 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851211128181 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905478372589 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143719768738 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101535916812 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.