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The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of million years.
The information regarding the evolution of the horse over four hundred thousand decades is depicted by the presented diagram. Overall, it is apparent that there are four main stages which highlight the changing on foot structure.
At the first level, during the first forty million years, the evolution started with the existence of Eohippus, with a short neck and tail and also four-phalanges feet. After a decade, there were some changes occurred in the body. The tail and neck became longer and one of the phalange vanished became three, and it is named as Mesohippus.
After one and half deca...
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Sentence: The tail and neck became longer and one of the phalange vanished became three, and it is named as Mesohippus.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to vanished and became
transformed into longer neck
transformed into a longer neck
At this stage the horse named by Merychippus.
At this stage the horse is named by Merychippus.
Sentence: After finishing the stage, the evolution come to an end where the horse appearance become stronger with the longer feet, neck and hair.
Description: The fragment appearance become stronger is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace become with verb, past tense
Sentence: The most explicit change occur on the feet where they become solid and longer.
Description: The fragment change occur on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace occur with verb, past participle
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
it is not 'After a decade' but 'after 10 million years'
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 870 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.833 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.409 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.645 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4