The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of million years

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The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of million years.

The information regarding the evolution of the horse over four hundred thousand decades is depicted by the presented diagram. Overall, it is apparent that there are four main stages which highlight the changing on foot structure.

At the first level, during the first forty million years, the evolution started with the existence of Eohippus, with a short neck and tail and also four-phalanges feet. After a decade, there were some changes occurred in the body. The tail and neck became longer and one of the phalange vanished became three, and it is named as Mesohippus.

After one and half deca...

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Sentence: The tail and neck became longer and one of the phalange vanished became three, and it is named as Mesohippus.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to vanished and became

transformed into longer neck
transformed into a longer neck

At this stage the horse named by Merychippus.
At this stage the horse is named by Merychippus.

Sentence: After finishing the stage, the evolution come to an end where the horse appearance become stronger with the longer feet, neck and hair.
Description: The fragment appearance become stronger is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace become with verb, past tense

Sentence: The most explicit change occur on the feet where they become solid and longer.
Description: The fragment change occur on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace occur with verb, past participle

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

it is not 'After a decade' but 'after 10 million years'

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