The diagram reveals that information of representation about glass container, such as bottles, are product and recycled. There are two categories.
Having a quick glance on the illustration, there are four stage in the process of glass production. First of all, mixing is the initial stage. There are four input like sand,soda ash, limestone and other chemicals. Second, melting glass furnace and temperatue at near about 1500c. Hence,there are more than shaping molten glass blowing. Finally, Glass is the prepared of the glass containers.
On the flip side, there are five step like collecting of used glass.It is collect to sorting by colour. Otherwise, they are plethora are used the washing remove imprities .It is easily to crushing and melting . There are provide the moulding into new products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the illustration, there are four stage in the process of glass production. Firs...
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Suggestion: , soda
...al stage. There are four input like sand,soda ash, limestone and other chemicals. Sec...
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Suggestion: , there
...nd temperatue at near about 1500c. Hence,there are more than shaping molten glass blow...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
...rs. On the flip side, there are five step like collecting of used glass.It is co...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...rs. On the flip side, there are five step like collecting of used glass.It is co...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... On the flip side, there are five step like collecting of used glass.It is coll...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ive step like collecting of used glass.It is collect to sorting by colour. Otherw...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sort'?
Suggestion: sort
...llecting of used glass.It is collect to sorting by colour. Otherwise, they are plethora...
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Suggestion: .
...ra are used the washing remove imprities .It is easily to crushing and melting . T...
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Suggestion: It
... are used the washing remove imprities .It is easily to crushing and melting . The...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...es .It is easily to crushing and melting . There are provide the moulding into new...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ily to crushing and melting . There are provide the moulding into new products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, second, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7383988379 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6796875 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4402322125 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8181818182 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6363636364 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186934832068 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617709380151 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910219035853 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14055231023 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106798954349 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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