The diagrams below show how glass containers such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

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The diagrams below show how glass containers such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

The given layouts reveals the information about how glass containers, such as bottles are produced, and recycled. It is a clear, and coherent represantation.

Firstly, there are four step of produce the glass container. First step is the mixing the sand, soda ash, limestone, and other chemical after this step the molting the glass furnace in 1500°c temperature. Furthermore, third main ste p has been shaping the molten glass blowing. Moreover, final main step has fully make a glass.

Secondly, there are only five step of recycling the glass container. First and foremost step is collection of used glass and mixing in colour. In addition to this washing the glass for remove impurities, and next step has been crushing,and melting the glass. Moreover, final step has moulding into new products of the glass.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
...resantation. Firstly, there are four step of produce the glass container. First s...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...resantation. Firstly, there are four step of produce the glass container. First s...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lass container. First step is the mixing the sand, soda ash, limestone, and other...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this step the molting the glass furnace in 1500°c temperature. Furthermore, thir...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...ng. Moreover, final main step has fully make a glass. Secondly, there are only fi...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
...glass. Secondly, there are only five step of recycling the glass container. First...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...glass. Secondly, there are only five step of recycling the glass container. First...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...urities, and next step has been crushing,and melting the glass. Moreover, final step...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 33.7804878049 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71244183721 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4331035693 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181868212489 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807158654447 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602472379914 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139733824237 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412650918488 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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