Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts idicate to five places on the earth. Talking about water and the ways of using it.
It seen obvious all pie charts have the got the lowest percentage in the domestic uses like the home. However, the largest precentage went with the agricultural and farms. The center of Asia has the greatest numbers of percentage of Agricultural use. On the other hand in europe they did not use, water so much as central Asia or Africa. They just use 32.5%. But in the industral they use it alot and the largest precentage with them.If we check on Africa, it seen they almost the second after Asia use water in industrial and opposite of Europe.
In North America and Europe they slightly same in industrial use and just less 4% to Europe, South Asia and South America afe uses the water in Agriculturat rather than industrial.
Overall, they all use water much in the farm and Agricultural. Europe and North America they use water more than others in the industrial areas. Africa got the lowest percentage in domestic and industrial uses.
- the only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
- library should provide more books rather than new tecnology such as computer and e-books. What extend do you agree or disagree. 56
- the only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 67
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- the picture show how tomatos ketchup made. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...ot and the largest precentage with them.If we check on Africa, it seen they almost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74175824176 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43810594201 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.481024352 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210728150935 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095000078898 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483296513905 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141613112028 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032205277794 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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