The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of silk worm as well as the phases in making silk cloth.
Overall, it is clearly evident that, producing silk cloth mainly entails 2 major processes;natural and artificial. However, the life cycle of silkworm is cyclical with 4 stages, while production of silk cloth is linear process with 3 steps.
Firstly, eggs are laid by moth on a large leaf. After a period of 10 days, the eggs are developed into silkworm larva and they resort to mulberry leaf as feed.Following this, silk thread is formed after a maximum of 6 weeks and after roughly a week a cocoon is formed. Lastly, after 2 weeks, there is maturation of cocoon into moth, which initiates the cycle again
To make silk cloth, the cocoons are carefully selected and boiled in water. They are then unwound into thread, ranging from 300-900m, before they are twisted and woven into dye to attain silk cloth.
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- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...After a period of 10 days, the eggs are develop into silkworm larva and they resort to ...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Following
...nd they resort to mulberry leaf as feed.Following this, silk thread is formed after a max...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd woven into dye to attain silk cloth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8025477707 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55540258204 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8595505048 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305482724432 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145716720108 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126617969942 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210724016447 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122449796559 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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