The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The diagrams describe the stages of a silkworm development and the steps to produce silk cloth from cocoon.
Overall, the life cycle of the silk worm stretches through 4 main steps from birth to reproduction and the process of creating silk cloth lasts 5 steps.
On the first step, silk eggs are laid in a leaf and settle there for 10 days before hatching a silkworm larva. To survive, the larva eats mulberry leaf as the main source of food. Four to six weeks later, the silk is produced and circle around the larva to create a silk thread on the outside of it. After 3 to 8 days, it becomes a cocoon completely and the initial larva goes out of the cocoon to be a moth. The moth begins its reproductive stage and the life cycle continues.
The material of the silk cloth production is the cocoon of the silk worm. Firstly, the cocoon is selected and then being boiled in water in a big pot. After that, people use the boiled cocoon to unwind in the thread of 300 to 900m before twisting it. Finally, the twisted one can be dyed immediately in a pot or being weaved before the last step.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37254901961 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28662678482 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4952348208 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269051832742 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109346563407 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118379386489 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193200354692 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845902788467 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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