The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The graphs depict information on the life span of the insect, used for producing the silk, and the process of such receiving itself. Overall, the silk obtaining is a multi-stage process, starting with the selection of the silkworm cocoons, which passes through several stages of development to reach the weave manufacturing.
Examining the first scheme, the life cycle of the silkworm consists of 4 stages, beginning with laying eggs. Silkworm larva, appearing in 10 days, use mulberry leaves for food and continue its transformation. From 4 to 6 weeks later larva is surrounded with the silk thread, however a tiny part of its body is still visible. The next step of metamorphosis lasts approximately 3-8 days and during this period the insect fully gets inside the cocoon. The final episode of the transformation runs 16 days, throughout which the moth arises and the life span repeats.
Nevertheless, in the silk cloth production only the cocoon of the silkworm is required. Unwinding of the nearly finished thread, being 300-900 m, is preceded by the selection OF the insects, which are thrown into the boiling water. The strings are twisted and covered with the dye in a special pot. The last action in this process is weaving of the finished material.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... moth arises and the life span repeats. Nevertheless, in the silk cloth producti...
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...0-900 m, is preceded by the selection OF the insects, which are thrown into the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03827751196 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80121373322 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8984872526 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224857230348 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763757928963 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887178654287 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141049150845 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284540798563 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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