The given illustrations present various stages in the life of a big fish named salmon.
Overall, it can be observed that there are three stages in the life cycle of a salmon fish from a baby fish to a matured one. These stages are characterized by their sizes and the places they reach in the process of development.
The cycle begins in the upper river where the slow currant allows deposition of salmon eggs below the aquatic vegetation called reeds, usually under small pebbles. Here, they will spend first five to six months until they are ready to hatch into baby salmons known as 'fry' which are about 3 to 8 cm in length. After that,they travel to the fast flowing area of the lower river where they will stay for the next four years. Once they become 12-15 cm in size, they enter the next phase of the development. In this phase,the are called smolt. During this stage they will migrate to the open sea and for the next five years they will gradually make transition into the next stage of the maturation to become adult salmon . A fully matured salmon can grow as much as 70-76 cm. Subsequently, the fully grown salmon return to it's place of birth, i.e upper river where it will once again lay it's eggs to start a new cycle.
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- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47345132743 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21254163529 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2077434138 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140444481728 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603418753439 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536983520258 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112476838589 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00992194486378 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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