The diagram give information about the life cycle of salmon, which is quite a big fish.
Overall, is clearly evident that, the entire life cycle of salmon passes through three distinct ares; beginning at the upper river and finishing off in an open sea.
Firstly, eggs are laid by salmon, which are located around small stones beneath reeds on the upper river moving slowly. This stage goes through 5-6 months in approximation, before the eggs are hatched into small fish known as fry with varied length of 3-8cm. Following this, the fry swims into lower river, which relatively flows fast. After 4 years, they are then developed into smolt, which are rather increased in size: between 12 and 15 cm.
Finally, the smolt enters into an open sea and stays for approximately 5 years, until they are fully matured into adult salmon. The adult salmon which is notably increased in size (70-76cm) leaves the ocean to the upper river to initiate another cycle.
- The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 73
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 78
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 78
- Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans Does this have a positive or a negative effect on people Give your own opinion and examples 81
- The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89570552147 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20406831143 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0717159965 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149845596724 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741621744187 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097182085508 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130582631154 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110728197904 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.