The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show illustrate the sequences of life stages undergone by a large species of the fish called salmon.

Salmon tend to lay eggs among small stones covered by a aquatic plants called reeds in the upper river where water flows slowly. These eggs remain there for there for five to six months until they are prepared to hatch and little fishes known as “fry” come out of them. The length of these small fishes is approximately three to eight centimeters. Then they swim toward lower river where they will stay there for almost four years. At this part of the river has a wild stream and moves very fast.

As long as fishes grow enough and reach to twelve to fifteen centimeters, they migrate toward open sea. At this stage, they called “smolt”.

During 5 years in the open sea, they gradually transition into new period of their life, the adult salmon. They are at this stage measure seventy to seventy six centimeters. Finally, when the time of spawning comes, then they again turn back to the their place of birth and lay eggs.

In conclusion, it is distinctively manifest that it took about ten years since a little fish change to an adult one by encountering various places.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lay eggs among small stones covered by a aquatic plants called reeds in the uppe...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'there for'.
Suggestion: there for
...e water flows slowly. These eggs remain there for there for five to six months until they are prepa...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: seventy-six
...ey are at this stage measure seventy to seventy six centimeters. Finally, when the time of ...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...ing comes, then they again turn back to the their place of birth and lay eggs. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81516587678 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55331945987 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9820913429 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150783150052 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615022809041 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103528727034 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115552963287 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140551035716 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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