The pictures illustrate the lifespan of salmom.
Overall, there are 3 main stages in the life cycle of salmons, starting with salmon eggs and ending with growing to adult ones.
In the first stage, female salmons lay their eggs among reeds and small stones in the upper river, which is slow moving. After approximately 5 to 6 months, eggs are become the baby fish which are called fry and are from 3 to 8 cm long. Then, the fry swim to the lowwer rivers which are fast flowing.
Turning to the next stage, after a period of 4 years, the fry grows gradually into a smolt which is about from 12 to 15 cm in length. Next, smolts migrate to open sea where they live for about 5 years to grow rapidly into the adult stage. In the final stage, adult salmon are about from 70 to 76 cm long. Finally, they swim back to the same place where they were born, the upper river, and then lay eggs. As a result, the life cycle of the next generation starts again.
- The pie charts give information about the number of sick days the population of an imaginary country took for three dififerent years The line graph shows the amount of money spent on healthcare per person per year from 1970 until 1990 84
- The line chart shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000 and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 73
- The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000 and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The graph below shows the average house price in 3 countries between the years 1997 2014 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25966850829 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00787497572 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5303233982 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976062746281 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408350081922 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397428729451 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584259459938 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437120302551 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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