This diagram depicts on the making process of cement and how the cement is used to prepared for construction purpose.
limestone and clay are raw materials for preparing cement. Initially the raw materials are crushed together , then the mixture is passed to mixer for well mixing , then it is passed to cylindrical shaped rotating heater, this heater has a provision to outlet the heat and mixture separately, the final step in preparing cement is grinding the mixture. once all the mixture is finely powdered it is packed in bags.
cements main purpose is to prepare concrete , mixture of cement(25%) ,water(10%) , sand(25%) and gravel(50%) results in concrete.All the raw materials of concrete should be added up in the desired volume, else the concrete mixture will not be up to the mark to use for constructions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Limestone
...o prepared for construction purpose. limestone and clay are raw materials for preparin...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring cement. Initially the raw materials are crushed together , then the mixture ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the raw materials are crushed together , then the mixture is passed to mixer for...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...xture is passed to mixer for well mixing , then it is passed to cylindrical shaped...
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Suggestion: Once
...eparing cement is grinding the mixture. once all the mixture is finely powdered it i...
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Message: “once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eparing cement is grinding the mixture. once all the mixture is finely powdered it i...
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Suggestion: Cements
...inely powdered it is packed in bags. cements main purpose is to prepare concrete , m...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ents main purpose is to prepare concrete , mixture of cement25% ,water10% , sand25...
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Suggestion: ,
... prepare concrete , mixture of cement25% ,water10% , sand25% and gravel50% results...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oncrete , mixture of cement25% ,water10% , sand25% and gravel50% results in conc...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er10% , sand25% and gravel50% results in concrete.All the raw materials of concre...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...25% and gravel50% results in concrete.All the raw materials of concrete should be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77815162366 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.36808018 43.030603864 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.6 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222246924144 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136095899514 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132738391111 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197678460831 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133813209294 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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