The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams depict electricity produced by utilizing water in two methods.
Overall, it is clear that water is used as the primary element to produce electricity in two methods. Furthermore, the scientists have prelude to proceed with the electricity production’s process using the hydroelectric dam and wave-air generator as the two significant methods.
In the hydroelectric dam method, water will be preserved in a reservoir in the first step. In addition, there is a gate which allows the hydropower workers to pour water into the reservoir. At the next stage, the speed of water will be skyrocketed due to the width and angle of the penstock. Therefore, in order to produce electric power, water will be entered to the rotated spindle in the generator. Afterward, water turns the turbine and spindle and continues to progress. At the end, electricity will be successfully distributed to power lines and the amount of water which is not used will be released to the river.
In wave-air generator progress, the waves will enter the lowest chamber consisting of water. At the next step, the generator operates machinery inside. As a result, air will release from the upper chamber and the other air will rise and turn the turbine and spindle. At the end of process, rotated spindle in wave-air generator will accomplished the electric power process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'accomplish'
Suggestion: accomplish
...ated spindle in wave-air generator will accomplished the electric power process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14349775785 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89622228447 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4758952768 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2307692308 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173248418175 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810874875326 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811209835972 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153118105498 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931718803975 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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