The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo.
The diagram gives information about the process of building an igloo from snow.
In general, there are 13 steps in totals, beginning with finding hard-packed snow and finally completing snow igloo. It can be seen that all process are manually done, and simple tools such as saws and shovels are used in all process.
At the beginning of the diagram, after locating the hard-packed snow, people use snow saw to cut snow into large snowed blocks with the suitable size. Next, the surface of these blocks is manually smoothed, and placed next to each other at the base to form a circular-shaped wall. An entrance is created by digging an enormous hole under the wall before putting the block into the last opening on the top of the igloo.
After that, soft snow is used to put onto the outer wall, and fill the crevices of the igloo by hand. The inside wall of the igloo are smoothed before building an entrance. The next step is that the igloo is covered the hole with snow blocks, small holes are created in the wall to bright the igloo.
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- Many people use distance learning programmes study material post TV the Internet to study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending colleagues or university To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than History Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 67
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food 56
- With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5935828877 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26173497752 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8034246938 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280196607186 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144832721629 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144905194998 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2307304574 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154948297477 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.