The three pictures below show three different kinds of bridges

Essay topics:

The three pictures below show three different kinds of bridges.

The diagrams give information about the architectural and structural designs of the three bridges.
Overall, the three bridges are designed according to the water body where they are situated, and thus differ in terms of size and structure.
It can be seen that the arch bridge has abutments anchored at each end side to balance the bridge instead of using piers. The permissible height is no more than 100 meters, and the length is under 200 meters. These bridges are built in the lake, so only small ships are allowed to travel.
The concrete girder bridges have unlimited rows of piers, each of which is spaced at the internals of 200 meters. These bridges are constructed over rivers 300 meters in height, only allowing for medium-sized ships.
The final suspension bridge is erected in deep locations, and suitable for construction in the sea. The erection of a megastructure requires to support of the main towers and suspension cables. Its space is 400-200 meters

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supporting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: supporting
...he erection of a megastructure requires to support of the main towers and suspension cable...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98159509202 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65415251538 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3656482387 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174947290841 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608048995702 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612695867884 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100285037189 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611241263121 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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