The flow charts given illustrates the life cycle of a bee and steps taken to produce honey. As an overall, there are 6 stages of making honey from as simple as an egg to honey in the bee hive. After that, production of honey undergoes 5 steps , starting with honey collection and ends at distributing and selling.
To begin with, a queen bee lay eggs in the honey combs. After 3 days, the egg become larva. This larva needs a week to be fully grown. Following that, larva needs 3 more weeks to develop into bees and be able to leave the hive. This bees will gather nectar from flowers . Finally, bees will leave the nectar in the hive and this will subsequently become honey.
Let us take a look now at production of honey. Firstly, beekeepers remove the honeycombs from the hive. After which, machine will extract honey from the honeycomb. Next, the honey is boiled and cleaned. As soon as honey is ready, it is packed in jars. Finally, honey is distributed to shops to be sold to the public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t, production of honey undergoes 5 steps , starting with honey collection and ends...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...nto bees and be able to leave the hive. This bees will gather nectar from flowers . ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...his bees will gather nectar from flowers . Finally, bees will leave the nectar in ...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uted to shops to be sold to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48351648352 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3380432256 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.421425784 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.4 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1333333333 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279714206429 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102568568858 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734124548897 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208950817396 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789687678094 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.2329268293 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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