Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best things in life don’t cost money.
There are some topics that we have definite thoughts. However, this topic trails me to the ambiguity. Sometimes I think without any money we can be happy for some period, nevertheless other times I think in life we don’t have to let money play a great role in our life
First of all, the word ‘happy’ only consist of 5 words but you can’t imagine how much meanings are lay under it. To be happy, sometimes you need only to hear some words such as ‘my dear’, ‘I love you’, ‘I’m very lucky that I have a person like you in my life’ and etc. To know that someone is there for you make you feel confident or yourself happy. Saying this words don’t cost any money.
In another hand, you can not say that I am happy if you go to clean roads every day at 5:00 or 6:00 AM till the 8:00 PM. Even someone says ‘I love you’ every day, believe me, you will not hear this saying because you will be busy with making your small hut warm, or you will be busy with buying a food, either buying an attire for your children with only $60 or $80. Or while you are working, your little daughter cook a meal rather than going to school. How can you be happy? This means sometimes you need money to be happy.
In another case, one of the best things in life is to be healthy or to have fun. Yes? To be healthy, it doesn’t mean you have to do some extraordinary thing. It is enough to walk or do sport every day morning or evening in the park. There is no any fee that you have to pay to the park. It is free, go and attempt to be healthy. I just want to give an example that money can’t buy. I know a person who suffers from cancer has millions however he can’t cure himself with that money. Sometimes being a wealthy doesn’t mean that you will be happy or healthy. There are some cases that money can not cope with.
To have fun with your friends, of course, free. You will be entertained by them and entertain them, together you will read books, discuss them. Or listen to music and talk to each other your problems, or you will share your gladness and relish your day. You will have memorable days with your friends. Of course, this will not cost any money, but don’t forget that you have to go out or invite your friend to your home, or you have to go there. To go out will cost money because you have to dinner or have a cup of tea, coffee which will not be free. Going or inviting your friend almost, but will cost some money.
In conclusion, never give up trying and never give up saying good words to each other. Try hard to have enough money and try to be happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, even so, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 1.00243902439 2095% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 6.8 368% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 5.60731707317 1373% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 965.302439024 224% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 500.0 196.424390244 255% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 3.73543355544 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28031225932 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 106.607317073 222% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 283.868780488 231% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 1.53170731707 1045% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.482926829268 1657% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 8.94146341463 324% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.0575276818 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4827586207 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2413793103 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96551724138 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 3.70975609756 539% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301356894347 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928867013015 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066317776561 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16226182299 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803080436095 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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