Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) ]Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.
The line graph illustrates, consumption of sweet foods makes up production of acid level in mouth which may cause dental decay. Increasing acid level demonstrates diminishing pH value.
Overall, it is considered as acid level below 5.5 has more chance to get tooth problem. Whereas, acid level above 5.5 measures least chance of decay. As is observed, cane sugar has most significant item to produce dental decay within 5 minutes. While, honey produce less amount of acid in mouth.
Normal pH level of mouth is 7 while, after consumption of cane sugar acid level in mouth increase to 3.5 which is higher than the fruit sugar and honey.They remained in danger level up to 30 minutes which is a major causative factor of dental decay. However, cane sugar decrease the pH level to just below 4.5 in 5 minutes of time then there were gradual decrease in pH after 20 minutes which decrease acidity in mouth.
Regarding honey, the amount of pH level in mouth has approximately 5 which is remained constant for next five minutes after that there were a rapid decline of pH level as presented. Honey takes less than 15 minutes to control against pH level in mouth in contrast to sugars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, then, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79512195122 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50441133705 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4185639689 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380808721644 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175524259219 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585294816436 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258095920625 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691971045534 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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