" The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school." To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?
Nowadays, Education plays a key role in our lives, it teaches everything our lives need, required for easy life forward. There is a huge range of sources to get educated like schools, family, friends, internet, and so on. there is talk of education from family is more important compared to school. To some extent, I disagree with this point of view.
Firstly. Educational program from schools is a structure from basic to advance, for example, Kindergarten students are taught how to singing, writing, spellings, and basic maths, ... Its basic foundation is equipped for students before the next step to primary school. Besides, when they have finished a course, they will be made the final terminal exams, which are reflected what information they have in their minds, and if they pass the exams they would be certified and graded accordingly. Additionally, there are not only being taught the theories from school but also being participated external activities for learning practice skills outside the school to evoke their intellectual curiosity, this can also help children to select the appropriate field of study when they leave school.
On the other side of the argument, education from family is restricted to the experience and discipline of parenting overprotective, they are always anxious about their child is not mature enough to handle everything by themself, these problems could bring about being relied on their parents and being lost independent learning. Nevertheless, there has the bright side of learning from family is practice skills like singing, play guitar, so forth. If children rely only on these teachings, they completely lag in the modern world and compared to their peers.
In conclusion, learning from family is good but we can't rely upon the only source, the schools provide a range of knowledge of the modern world, so I think we can mix both to help children comprehensive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 626, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to practice'
Suggestion: to practice
...ipated external activities for learning practice skills outside the school to evoke thei...
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Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...on, learning from family is good but we cant rely upon the only source, the schools ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19292604502 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75570764748 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585209003215 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 283.868780488 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.0255130115 43.030603864 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187616435618 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849317742959 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846832395965 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118857636923 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594498676644 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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