El Nino is a warm ocean current that affects the climate in Australia and Peru. Overall, the two diagrams illustrate the differences between El Nino compare to normal weather patterns.
Under normal conditions, strong trade winds blow from the Eastern Pacific, pushing both storm clouds and warm water westwards while the weak opposing winds blow from the Western Pacific. Therefore, the weather in Australia is rainy, which provides an abundant supply of water for local vegetation. Although the weather in Peru is sunny, the cool and nutrient-rich water under the thermocline is elevated to the ocean surface on the West Coast of South America, increasing the marine life population in Peru.
Under El Nino conditions, the eastern trade winds weaken while the eastward-blowing winds become stronger. Consequently, the warm, nutrient-poor water and storm clouds flow direction is reversed, blocking the cool water from rising up. A similar pattern can be seen for climates on both sides of the Pacific Ocean which negatively impact living organisms, excessive sunlight without rain killing plant life in Australia, whereas in Peru, fisheries decreased due to the lack of essential nutrients in the water.
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- El Nino is the name of warm ocean current that affects weather of the Pacific Ocean The diagrams compare the normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino Conditions 89
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- The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41798941799 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77181016826 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5779513886 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239487975904 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125020582919 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129909461369 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219358537478 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178349051863 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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