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The diagram illustrates two age groups with ten prevalent elements that impact their working at a given company. Overall, it can be seen that, while younger devote their life to work in order to achieve a better position in the near future, people between the age of 45 - 60 consider money as a motivation for their work.
The differences between generations’ thoughts are obvious in some of the factors. With the chance for personal development, the proportion of the 18 - 30 is approximately 90% and that of the other is only 30%. The same trend also appears in other aspects, such as relaxed working environment with 86% in the younger group and 28% in the older, job security with 40% and 20% respectively. Besides, the concern of the youngster among promotion prospects is bigger with 83% and only 50% in the other group.
However, there are also some similarities between these two age groups. They both assess team spirit at nearly 60% and work environment at 30%. In addition, income and job satisfaction is another important factor which accounts for 70% with youngsters, 68% with olders. People between the age of 45 - 60 concern more about their bosses and their peers’ attitudes, as the numbers are 45% and 42% respectively. These factors among youngsters are slightly less with 43% and 40% respectively.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-07-03 | Trần Thanh Ngân | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...en generations’ thoughts are obvious in some of the factors. With the chance for personal d...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which accounts for 70% with youngsters, 68% with olders. People between the age ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95495495495 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78944748722 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0043287813 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.