The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first pie chart given illustrates the amount of energy used for different activities in a common home in Australia and the second one indicates the percentage of greenhouse gas generated by each of these activities.
Overall, heating requires more energy than the rest, while the largest amount of pollution is produced during water heating. Cooling presents the lowest percentages in both charts.
A median house in Australia uses up to nearly three quarters of the energy in heating (42%) and water heating (30%). Then, other appliances and refrigeration take up 15% and 7% of it respectively. Lastly, lighting (4%) and cooling (2%) demand insignificant proportions of this energy.
Talking about the total of greenhouse emissions from an Australian home, heating produces more or less a third (15%) of the amount of energy that it takes up. The rest of activities generate more pollution than energy consumed. Water heating creates approximately one third (32%), while refrigeration and other appliances are responsible for 14% and 28% of it respectively. Finally, lighting (8%) and cooling (3%) are accountable for about a tenth of the amount of released gas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of it respectively. Finally, lighting 8% and cooling 3% are accountable for about...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, second, then, third, while, talking about, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97583923402 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5682295133 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186341800644 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066485504455 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690868039573 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116526151788 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631482097137 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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