There are two pie-charts shown. First of which, gives information about the proportion of energy used by an Australian for several aspects of day-to-day lives like: heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliances. Second of which, illustrates the percentage of the greenhouse gas released due to energy consumption by heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliances.
Overall, we can observe that Australians mostly consume their energy through heating and water heating. On the contrary the main proponents of greenhouse gas emission aren't heating and water heating, it is water heating and other appliances.
First of all, an average Australian consumes 42 percent of the total household energy for heating purposes, closely followed by water heating, amounting to 30 percent. Energy use by other meidums are quite small compared to the 72 percent covered by heating and water heating. Regrigeration uses one-seventh of the total energy used, lighting and cooling accounts for a mere 2% and 4% respectively. Lastly, other appliances use one by fifeteenth poportion of the total energy.
The major factors, driving greenhouse gas release into the environment are water heating and other appliances. They take up 32% and 28% respectively of the total amount. Refrigetation and heating also are a major proponent for greenhouse gas emission as they account for 15% and 14% of the total gas released into the atmosphere, followed by lighting which releases 8% and cooling which emits 3% of the overall greenhouse gas present in the air.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...n proponents of greenhouse gas emission arent heating and water heating, it is water ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49392712551 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96198050725 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518218623482 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2959076478 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244068752627 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977233140262 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440208501139 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15151152986 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505307977457 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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